Short stories, part one

Thank you for your comments, emails, or input on the West group list.  I’ve added a page to the sidebar, called Downloads.  On it, you will find three short stories.  

The first, Echoes, is a West-universe related story about Kallandras, the Master Bard.  The second, Birthnight, is the first short story I sold; it was written as Michelle Sagara.  The last, Nightingale, is one of the stories that I particularly like, and one of the few SF stories I’ve written.  For some reason, my SF stories end up being somewhat darker than my fantasy stories.

I’ve closed comments on the Downloads page, because in theory it’s static, so if you have anything to say (links not working, etc.), here’s a good place to leave comments.  Also, I only attached .pdfs, but if that doesn’t work for people, let me know, and I’ll also put up an .html page, the way I’ve done with first chapters.

I hope you enjoy them!

I’ve been renovating

I hope you like it.  I’ve broken out the series in the bibliography so they now each have their own page, but have left the text in the plain list alone.  I’ve added cover images to the sub-pages.  More important, I’ve also added .pdfs and .html of the first chapters (or prologues) of all of the DAW and Luna novels that have been published.  I will, hopefully closer to the publication date, also add the first chapter for Cast in Silence.  

I haven’t added links for the first chapters of the Sundered series, because unfortunately, I have no electronic copies of those; they were written in the days when floppies seemed like a good back-up medium, and the floppies with the files didn’t survive the passage of time all that well.  (BenBella worked from the printed pages of the original mass market editions, rather than an actual text copy, because I didn’t have any electronic text versions to send them).  As time permits, I’ll try to type them in.

The one thing I would like to do is start to put a few short stories up on the site for download, and I’m taking votes or suggestions at this point; if there’s an out-of-print story in particular that you want to see but haven’t been able to track down, please leave me a message in the comments to this post.

Michelle West update: City of Night

I have some news for Michelle West readers.

But first, a small digression.

I’ve said before, and will no doubt say again, that no two writers I know work in the same way. It doesn’t matter what their stated process is; when you get down to details, the process that sounds the same actually differs widely.

Some writers are outliners. They can write an outline which they can more or less follow, and use the outline to guide their story as they write the actual book. I can’t. I’ve done it once, and what it taught me was that it’s not a guide — for my particular creative process — it’s a straightjacket.

Some writers can look at a story and have a natural feel for its length; they know when the story will be too big — or too small — for a single novel. They know if a novel is roughly 100k words, or 125k words. I envy this in the same way I envy someone who is fluently bilingual, because I am also incapable of this.

My editor at DAW, Sheila Gilbert, has worked with me for nine novels now. She knows my writing, she understands my process, and she understands the way I parse novel structure. She asked me, once, for an outline, and when I fell silent — and I’m not generally silent, but she’s patient with this — she understood that outlines were not something that worked with my process. This would have been after Hunter’s Death was completed and handed in.

We had discussed what I would do next, and I told her that I would like to write a duology set in the same universe as The Sacred Hunt. She asked me what it was about, and I told her; she asked me for something on paper, and I believe I gave her two double-spaced pages. It might have been less. But knowing the way I work, she bought the two books on those two pages.

(I should add here that the first three chapters of the first draft of Broken Crown were actually about Kiriel’s childhood. They didn’t work, in the end, and they are the only chapters that haven’t worked that I’ve kept.)

You’ll note that I’ve said ‘duology’ and ‘two books’ here. You will also note, if you’ve read them, that there are actually six books in The Sun Sword.

I knew that Broken Crown ended with a scene between two characters. But this was before I started to write it. The scene that I thought would end the first book occurred at the end of the third book, because the war and the politics of the war were far more complicated than I anticipated, and because there are some emotional transformation arcs that simply don’t work if they’re too compressed.

I knew what the end of the series would be; I knew where it was going. (I’m trying very hard to avoid spoilers here, just in case.) But…I didn’t realize how long it would take to get there because all of the emotional depth and tone of a work come out only in the actual writing of it, for me. Before I start to write, I plan, I research, I build backgrounds (and try to figure out how the hell an army of any size both moves and gets fed, but that’s a different post), I look at the balance of power, and magic, of gods and immortals — all of these things are done before I start to write the actual book. But the emotional weight and mood of a book only comes when I write.

And the people become real only then, as well. The writing itself is a form of alchemy that brings life to the dry facts of research. The excitement — and the frustration and the uncertainty and the joy — is in the writing, not the planning.

I always think the story will be shorter than it is. Always. I think this is partly self-defense, because sometimes the length of a novel seems so daunting at the beginning, and beginnings for me often require several starts before I find the right way into the story itself. But it’s partly because the nuance and the complexity occur as I’m in the middle of it, and not before.

You’re probably wondering where this is going.

It’s been over a year since Hidden City was published in hardcover, and since then, the paperback has been released. And I have been working on the next book in the series the entire time. In June of last year, I wrote that I was tying up two long arcs on the way to House Terafin. As usual, this tying up took a little longer than I thought.

But I did. Then, instead of ending the book there, I thought It’s only a few hundred more pages once they reach Terafin. I can just fit that in as well. I kept writing.

Six hundred pages later, with at least another two hundred pages to go, I accepted the inevitable. I could not, in fact, fit in the second, closing arc, unless I started to cut several hundred pages. I sent what I’d finished to my editor to ask her what she thought. She agreed that both arcs would not fit in a single book, and also emphatically rejected the possible cuts.

And so, we come to the point of this long post. The two arcs, which will bring to a close the early life of Jewel and her den, will be published as two separate books. The first of these, CITY OF NIGHT, is schedule for March of 2010. I am not quite finished the second, HOUSE NAME, but that’s a couple of months away, now.

I want to apologize for the delay, and for the peculiarities of my writing process. While I was waiting to hear back from my editor, I started the groundwork for HOUSE WAR, which will follow HOUSE NAME. The battle at the end of Sun Sword changed the world in ways that weren’t immediately obvious, but some of those will become obvious as the House War is fully joined.

I do know where things are going, I promise. I will finish these books, just as I finished Sun Sword. I love these characters and their world and their stories, and I will, I’m certain, weep to see them go when their stories are finally done. But…I don’t know how many books it will take. I want to be able to tell you, because it’s one of the questions I’m most frequently asked.

The truth is, I don’t know. Every time I try to come up with an answer, I’m wrong, and I feel guilty — and vaguely unprofessional — because I’ve gotten it wrong again, and I know that’s disappointing. I was trying so desperately to fit all of this into the one book because I’d said it would be one more book. And it’s two.

So I’m going to try to avoid that part, at least for a little while. I will say that, having laid out some of the groundwork for the House War, I can’t see it being one book. That’s a guess. But for fear of making the same mistake, I’d like to leave it at that for now; to say that CITY OF NIGHT is finished, bar revisions, and that HOUSE NAME is almost finished, bar same, and that the House War has just been started.

— Michelle

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